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Thursday, 19 May 2016

Cool shared writing from the STORY TELLERS

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Once upon a time there was a robot called Frank and a giant

(Describe character) Frank - metal, round, shiny     Giant - covered in hair, can change body size

Who lived in a spooky house in the forest

(Describe setting)   Spiders all over it. Dust everywhere. Vines and spiderwebs everywhere.

One day a man came to the house to rob the house

(Something happened to start the story) Robber steals a couple of rats, jewellery and robots spare parts.

And so they try and catch the robber but he is too fast.

(What does the character do next? Why?) The robot and giant make a trap covered with leaves to catch the robber.

However the giant tries to catch him with his hands and makes a big bang on the ground.

(Something goes wrong) Which causes an earthquake and splits the earth in half, into a chasm of death.

Then the giant steps on the trap and is caught.

(How does the character try to solve the problem?)

Eventually Frank the robot saves the giant

(Do they succeed? Why?)

In the end the robber was caught by Frank

(Bring your story to an end)

Once upon a time there was a round, shiny robot called Frank and a giant who could change his body size. They lived in a spooky house covered in spider webs and creepy crawlies. Rats the size of cats walked everywhere.

One day a man came to their house to rob them because he needed rats, jewellery and robot parts. And so they tried to catch the robber by making a trap and covering it with leaves. Sadly, the robber was too fast. However, the giant tried to catch him with his hands and made a big bang on the ground. The bang was so powerful that it made a chasm that split the house in half.

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    1. very intristing kauri see if you can do show not tall :)

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  3. Hi

    I liked your story and the different starters you have used in the story.

    From Emily

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  4. not the resin i was excepting

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    1. not the reason i was expecting

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  7. Hi
    That is a good story , there are some good words in there too.
    From Jessica

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  9. Hi, and I like your amazing story and I liked how
    You used the word Sadly and how-ever well done!

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  10. Hi Kauri
    What a ending!
    From StevenRoom8

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  11. Hi kauri
    What an ending.

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  13. Hi I like what you write there are good words in there by william

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  14. cool I like that story

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  15. Hi Kauri, good story. It's cool and interesting. Keep up the good work. From Atlantis

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  16. Hi
    That is a good story , there are some good words in there too.

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  17. hi kauri thanks for sharing it was very intresting

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  18. Hi Kauri good story it is very interesting keep up the good work.From Matrix

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  19. Hi Kauri good story it is very interesting keep up the good work.From Matrix

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  20. Hi Kauri i like your story especially when you said rats the size of cats very scary :) From:Johann

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  21. hi i like the interesting words from your story and it is a cool story , keep up the good work

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  22. hi i like the interesting words from your story and it is a cool story , keep up the good work

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  23. hi my name is luke i like your interesting words and how it ended i love it keep up with the fantastic work :)

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  24. kia ora kauri,
    awesome story.I like the shared writing, at least you should have a story mountain.have a good day working together.
    from zac:p

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